Question #1
The old
and the new, the change of time all making life different from how we know it.
In this passage George Eliot expresses her opinions on to how the times have changed
leisure. How the way people used to live has now been overwhelmed with all this
new rush of life. The curiosty in people that has rised and their wanting to
get to know the world more instead of just sitting around as life passed by.
She talks about not judging old leisure who had a free conscious and never let
anything get in the way of what he wanted to do. Using different tactics she
explains how the old used to be and how you can not compare the fast moving
leisure of todays day to what used to be at the time when leisure used to be
completely diffferent.
Using
things like personification George Eliot gets her description of old leisure
across to state her point. She compares old leisure to an old man who does
things very relaxed and in his own way. Who is not scared to be blunt about
what he does and does not do. She also seems to tie in the image of
irresponsibilty and carelessness to the image she is creating and portraying to
her audience. She does speak about the difference between the old and the new
thoguh which set the tone to the contast in the short passage given here. She
is using leisure to explain and kind of show the good and bad sides of leisure
as it used to be but it also makes you think of how times are now and how there
is no way you can be like things where then. I think its all part of change in
life and there is no way to change that.
Using
personification and making leisure a person George Eliot expresses her feelings
by contrast of her current life. How she feels maybe things work a little too
fast in the mdoern day and we have no real time to get the appropriate time to
just sit back and be able to take in life one day at a time. How now we are
always on the run or trying to fit way to much into one day. A very interesting
piece as to how someone expresses their ideas about change and puts it into a
passage with much thought like the one we read for this essay.
Question 2
In the
Grapes of Wrath the world came to know the real story behind the depression in
the US. The wrongs that people had to live through and the suffering they all
had to encounter. Using an American family with different age groups and
relationships I think was one of the aspects that made the audience connect
with the story. Also using the stories in detail of what they had to live
through in the conditions they lived in and all the bad they had to encounter
really influences the reader to think about how these people where really and
truly miserable. Wanting to modify the lives these people had and show the
world the author had to establish certain connections and this is how she did
it.
When
you find a character in the story that you can connect with it really changes
your point of view on how you read the story. You don't have to go through the
situation that the person is living but you do know what it feels like to be a
teen or a girl and how hard it would be to go through the situations the
characters are living through. I believe this is what made the Grapes of Wrath
a very influential story on young and old alike because there were the
connections established from the beginning.
I
think the explicit details of the situations that the family was stuck in also
made a big contribution on the connection of the audience in the story. Feeling
sympathy and sorrow for another person or people is what bring you more attatched
to them and I think the author of this book used that tactic very well when
writing this book. Wanting nothing but the best to come out of this situation
as well for the family is a sign at attatchment and connection to the book as
well. I am sure when someone not aware of the situation who reads this would be
willing to have changed it at the time if they could of. Making this a very
persuasive tactic.
This
was definetly not a satire story which many authors use when they want change
or to make something better but this definetely made the strong connections
with the audience to want to change the situation of something so great like
the great depression which the family was in. Making and establishing those
connections through the authors persuasive manners really made this a great
book to connect to and a great example of writing on how to let someone know
what you don't like and not only make them become aware but want to take action
as well.
Good introduction for both of the essays; but i think you should state the specific tactic that author used in the introduction.Overall, both essays contain great examples and ideas.!!
ReplyDeleteYeah I had a really tough time approaching both essays but thank you!! (:
DeleteBoth are very nice. It's amazing how I could almost hear you saying all of it in person. It is as if you put yourself on a piece of paper for readers to read. That is really cool. I don't think I have ever had this feeling before by reading something. This is pretty cool. Well anyways the diction is what I love the most. You worded things greatly. Chen Ming is right about you having good introductions. It is hard to start off an essay but you nailed it.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Hope!! I really appreciate your comment!
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